Legal Document Grammar Correction

Summary

When drafting legal documents, its crucial to use clear and precise language. Ensure clauses are not repetitive and cover all necessary aspects, such as confidentiality and indemnity. For instance, a service provider should implement processes to keep customer data confidential and indemnify the customer for breaches due to negligence, with the burden of proof on the customer. Proper grammar and structure enhance the documents effectiveness.

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"As it lies into rarest situation, we can opt to cost price also in our past business relations any such damage doesn't not arise for effectiveness of this particular clause" re-write into proper grammar
Sure, here's the re-written version:
"Given the rarity of the situation, we can consider using the cost price in our past business relations, as no damage has arisen that would affect the effectiveness of this particular clause."
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As discussed it has already covered in the above *.* & sub clause, it seems repetitive clause
It looks like you're seeking assistance with grammar and legal drafting. Here's the re-written version:
"As discussed, it has already been covered in section *.* and its sub-clauses; hence, the clause appears repetitive."
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can you re-draft clause, i will give you some information
Sure, I can help with re-drafting the clause. Could you please provide the specific clause or information that you want to be re-drafted?
Service Provider shall put in place processes and regulations to ensure that the Customers data is kept confidential and only used or providing services to the Customer. Service Provider hereby indemnifies the Customer for any data breach due to the negligence of the Service Provider, here re-write that service provider will indemnifies if The burden of proof for establishing the occurrence of the breach and its origin lies with the customer.
Here's the revised clause:
"Service Provider shall implement processes and regulations to ensure that the Customer's data is kept confidential and only used for providing services to the Customer. The Service Provider indemnifies the Customer for any data breach due to the negligence of the Service Provider, provided that the burden of proof for establishing the occurrence and origin of the breach lies with the Customer."
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