Professional Legal Document Drafting

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The conversation involved refining legal language for affidavits and motions. The user sought to make their legal documents sound more professional. The responses provided polished versions of the original texts, enhancing clarity and precision. The user was advised to clarify contract terms regarding workmanship and licensing for a stronger case.

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again On September *, *, a plumbing and HVAC inspection at the Subject Property failed due to faulty workmanship by the Defendants, who could not provide the required licenses during the inspection. Following this failure, the Defendants' demeanour towards the Plaintiffs worsened, leading them to hire a new plumber and demand additional advance payments.
It sounds like you might have a solid case against the Defendants for faulty workmanship and potential breach of contract.
Could you clarify whether the Defendants were initially hired under a written contract, and if so, what terms regarding workmanship and licensing were included?
i just want u to make this osund better for the affidavit On September *, *, a plumbing and HVAC inspection at the Subject Property failed due to faulty workmanship by the Defendants, who could not provide the required licenses during the inspection. Following this failure, the Defendants' demeanour towards the Plaintiffs worsened, leading them to hire a new plumber and demand additional advance payments.
Sure, I can help with that. Here's a more polished version for your affidavit:
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On September *, *, a plumbing and HVAC inspection at the Subject Property failed due to substandard workmanship by the Defendants, who were unable to produce the necessary licenses during the inspection. Following this failure, the Defendants' demeanor towards the Plaintiffs deteriorated, prompting the Plaintiffs to hire a new plumber and demand additional advance payments.
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